Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(12/25/2011 8:41:00 AM)
Mr. Dean, you are the one who introduced the terms and jargon here. I merely pointed out some of the many reasons why I think the poem is not particularly good.
I believe I understand the poem, having read it thoroughly and having given you a fairly long list of phrases from it that are trite. You certainly have the right to defend the work as surrealist but let's not forget that you are the one who is trying to find a pigeon hole for it.
I'm not sure who your target audience is, but I believe the work should simply be dismissed as poorly written, meaningless, bloated, trite, and confused.