Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(6/15/2012 3:06:00 PM)
Frank, Still having trouble with your commas, I see. Are you reDING WIDELY IN GOOD CONTEMPORARY POETS, AS I'VE SUGGESTED OVER AND OVER AND OVER?
No way will just writing stuff will improve your stuff. This grave poem is shot through with awkward phrases. Read them out loud and you'll find them. JC
(6/15/2012 7:16:00 AM)
Dude.. why are you " Corporate Internet Marketing Exec" .. Its a shameee...