Poetics and Poetry Discussion
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Jefferson Carter
(6/15/2012 3:06:00 PM)
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Frank, Still having trouble with your commas, I see. Are you reDING WIDELY IN GOOD CONTEMPORARY POETS, AS I'VE SUGGESTED OVER AND OVER AND OVER?
No way will just writing stuff will improve your stuff. This grave poem is shot through with awkward phrases. Read them out loud and you'll find them. JC -
Lijo Thomas
(6/15/2012 7:16:00 AM)
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Dude.. why are you " Corporate Internet Marketing Exec" .. Its a shameee...