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Jefferson Carter Jefferson Carter Male, 92, United States (6/1/2013 12:12:00 PM)

Neo Onder Water (maybe a pseudonym, ya think?) , who's from " Netherlands" sent me this lovely and inspiring poem. I was truly touched by his insights about how to use poems to get French girls into bed....

i cannot rhyme like jefferson
especially in english or on personal purposes
in the after hours or in a dead like rat coffee house
i use to tell to the girls
do you know jefferson?
some say no and i cannot help but to recite one of his poems by heart
for the others i always say: 'let me tell one of his fav'
often we end in his parent's bed
hald drunken and maybe it's better
than in her marital one
for my forties, i have tried the big jump
to write some english poems on my own
but only with french girls
though i believe sometimes it's not very useful
when they see me naked,
for not apparent reason
they always google and giggle

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  • Rookie Augustus Egg (6/1/2013 9:17:00 PM) Post reply
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    ..and what makes this even more fan-testicle is its being in perfect synthetic English

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