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Jefferson Carter Jefferson Carter Male, 91, United States (6/1/2014 11:31:00 AM)

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Lamont, one of your better efforts. It slips off into ugly Lamontisms (the bowels of nowhere, bullets that divide us) but for the most part retains its dignity and avoids the sappiness inherent in the subject matter. There are enough capable lines here that if you did some serious pruning, you'd end with up with a nice poem.

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