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Ndubuisi Okona
(8/14/2012 5:31:00 PM)
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OBLIVION MODIFIED
Silence they say is golden and quite glittery
All it ever brings is pain and total misery
Everyone wants to be proved right
But none wants to be left out in love
A fresco of wasted dreams
A collage of aspirations cast in streams
Silence I hear is golden yet so deafening
I try to speak it’s always a squabbling
Really scared to disturb the peace
Tried to piece back one good piece
It was only a wink in the dark
The pendulum did not swing back
Watched love in profile take a dive
Settled with the ripples of lies and unlusty lives
Silence I see is golden and so so dazzling
Autumn’s child came cool and strong
A blink all green in me was gone
Oh! The peals of heart break and it stings
If I could detach my manhood and cry for a moment
If I could reach back and erase that moment
I walked up and said “how do you do”
Twice I loved thrice she lied
Can this justify my disposition?
Kindly lace my Valium with deprivian
Kindly deprive me of this oblivion
So I could wake up to you
Lay what is left on you
Time tells if these would all come true. -
Shania Bhayana
(8/12/2012 11:20:00 AM)
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http://www.poemhunter.com/shania-bhayana/
must see this once..
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Immanuel Santos
(8/11/2012 8:25:00 PM)
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She wants me
A lovely rose kept with me
And thorns that stuck into my bone,
It becomes viral to heal the unknown roots,
Letting me weaker and narrowing the things being hold.
She wants me die on the vine loving her...
The infinite moves growing taller
And blocking my receptors to gather my senses,
This partially restrained me to isolate from the reality,
But it cuts my nerves nor feels anything yet I need morphine.
She still wants me die on the vine loving her...
My minds controls everything
And my heart believes on something,
Even i excreted totally from importantly nothing,
But my backbone that holds my strength extremely grieving.
She has it all and wants me die on the vine loving her...
The cells that connects is strange,
It binds me to keep me sicker and bitterer,
And carries no cure that is very much late to take over,
But the after effect of broken hearted continues to flicker.
She really wants me to die on the vine loving her...
There is something left that it haven't touch,
It is my soul that shows me hopes and lay me on my couch,
This is the finale of the road, even no clearer direction that much,
The end point has been rough to get over the mirror line of my past.
She wants and cursed me to die on the vine loving her...
Corleto Immanuel Delos Santos -
Dakotah Broce
(8/10/2012 3:30:00 PM)
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a broken boy and lonely girl
now have eachothers heart
they took this leap of faith together
helpless from the start
both in love with misery
neither had a clue
the fire they were playing with
the damage it could do
blinded by the butterflies
sad theyll soon all burn
their beauty lost to headrtache
so much theyve yet to learn
the things they had in common
the ways they hurt and why
the way the two were broken
theyd both been left to find
the two were good at falling
in love and apart
neither one could stop it
helpless from the start
finally finding someone
that saw the broken view
loved you more because it
theyre pieced together too
once so wrapped up in eachother
what a shame to see
only pain now comes from hearts
that once brought such relief
everything about them now
was in the mists of change
how they loved the way they lived
not at all the same
bound by all that hurts them
not strong enough to run
they fan the flames around them higher
found hurts not so fun
no longer did they savoir
suffering in love
pain is pain all hurts the same
theyd finally had enough
neither very strong still broken from the past
they needed more then love to share
if they ever hoped to last
they both knew it was best
they spend some time apart
finally one was strong enough
he had to break her heart
the things they had in common
the ways they hurt and why
kept their love a tragity
the world around them died
neither one expected this
as much love as they shared
theyd let eachother fall so far
they were supposed to care
like the love that bound them
before they had a clue
their falling turned to dragging
still nothing could they do
even though it killed her
neither could deny
only bad they were together
" i love you but goodbye"
a broken boy and lonely girl
had broke eachothers heart
they took this leap of faith together
hopeless from the start
once in love with misery
now they had a clue
the fire they were playing with
the damage it would do
she knew without a doubt
before he ever left
his absence ripped her heart from her
left helpless to the thieft
lost all faith he had in her
nothing could he believe
his only choice to walk away
pushed be her deciet
so now know their story
im sure by now you see
the ways they hurt, and loved, and lost
a lot like you and me...Replies for this message:-
Mabel A
(8/20/2012 6:00:00 AM)
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I like ur poem, its a journey of two hearts much like many. Its a tale that we can all identify with. I just wish you could inject more of your own person in it. Cause u seem to write from the point o ... more
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Mabel A
(8/20/2012 6:00:00 AM)
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Devaki Rockzz
(8/10/2012 9:48:00 AM)
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god blessed every one and he gave different talents fr all but the talent is hidden in every person... when a person who knws his talent and who make it very valuable they are the people have real talent. if any person couldnt able 2 find his/her talent then we r the path to find der talent make them in a right path.
every find talent from every one and say them to use it in a proper way then only we wil the grt role models. -
Kharon March
(8/9/2012 3:55:00 PM)
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Hello all aspiring and current poets I hav been writing poets and i would like some reviews and comments and in return id be open to reading and reviewing yours Thank you all and I wish love and prosperty for you all
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Francisca Darko
(8/20/2012 3:46:00 PM)
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Sure, I'll be reading your poems. I'm quite new to the site and I've only just started sharing my poetry so it would be appreciated if you commented and reviewed mine too.
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Francisca Darko
(8/20/2012 3:46:00 PM)
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Christine Clarke
(8/9/2012 2:07:00 PM)
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Hello, I am Christine, a poet with a passion for writing, poems, songs and short stories. I am new to this site, it seems interesting and would like to know more about it....Thanks..
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Kathryn Frumberg
(8/9/2012 1:00:00 PM)
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hello
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Annamaria Gagno
(8/9/2012 12:27:00 PM)
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Death beneath my own heart, how can she explain herself, the death toll, risen for a reason, not knowing when or how, just there to understand, no one in life is perfect, she guesses she ain't the one, God came into the light, surround her with a vision of interest, there is hope to fight, there is peace of harmony, faith is to believe, inside herself,
God is there, to hold her hand, guide her within, the most vision of beauty, God gave her strength to let it go, beauty is the love of God; God gave her the answer, of her death to be, spoken up others, why must she go, God came to her, it's time, when is the time, to say good-bye, to our loves ones, mostly her children, she'll die in peace,
Knowing who is awaiting for her in the gardens of love, the one most, missed, the general life once there, he was gone, before her time, God came to him, my loving husband, who is much missed by all who endure him, now, it's time for her, to go to her, but God will guide her, to the one, who gave her all, the beautiful within her soul, no one shall endure the faith, she will rise, to the sun, she will tear for the moment, when it rains, letting go, is the most hardest, to do, she knows now, children are all gone, on their own, married, children, loved by all, they will seek, the loving mother once here now gone, grandchildren, will remember the smile, each time, they will arrive, to grandmothers house, as they enter, there is a sent of a smell, fresh baked goods, children of their grandmother, they'll remember the smile, to who she is, now they old the key, of their own parents, to how the loving family is, not now, grandmother gave, the skills, what families are suppose to do, remember us, let her go, she will reunited with her beloved love, a husband to her, a father to his children, and grandfather they never got to know, all stories were told by their loving parents and grandmother, to who was, their grandfather was like, missed by all, now they know, grandmother will be missed, know the silence will be gone, remain, the trust, within their beloved children, as they stand tall, looking beyond a journey, that came to the end, seeing their love ones go, sending a messege through their own hearts, peaceful they know, grandmother pain has gone, reaching out to the sky, God is there, to guide her, to the one she missed, her beloved soul mate, who became all to her, the love of death, is knowing death became beneath her only heart, to die in peace, for the harmony of a blessing, is knowing, God hears each Prayer said and done. -
Leslie Philibert
(8/8/2012 10:59:00 AM)
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Hallo Fellow Poets,
I´m new to this site and have posted a lot of my poems here - please have a look at them. If you take the time to review I will look at your work too.
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Frank (popeye) Pulver
(4/18/2013 4:15:00 AM)
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Sir, I commented on one of your post to one of my poems. Please give me some feed back.
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Frank (popeye) Pulver
(4/18/2013 4:15:00 AM)
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