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Adam M. Snow Male, 25, United States (7/27/2012 4:48:00 PM)

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Through the Eyes of the Untold Lore

Through these stained eyes, dark is all I see
yet I try to live, believing this is me.
But all I could do is place my heart on a page,
and watch it rot away with every age.

All I am through your eyes is a ghost,
whom you don't dare miss the most.
All you are through my eyes, is hopelessness;
but my words I write are my distress.

Peaking through my once soulless muse,
as my heart lies victim to your solemn abuse.
I live to be your puppet, nothing more
but I am a writer of many lore.

And as I dare write with missing heart,
it is with you whom my stories start.

-Adam M. Snow

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes (8/8/2012 1:02:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
The sentiments here are deep and nicely told. I enjoyed reading as I like the rhythm and the flow, being also a writer of sonnets, myself.
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- Adam M. Snow (8/22/2012 11:18:00 PM) Post reply
  Thank you for your kind comment
Joseph Ojogba Daniel (8/7/2012 4:30:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
how did i miss this?I love diz poem, especially the last stanza and the line that says 'i place my thought in a page and allow it rot through the age'
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- Adam M. Snow (8/7/2012 7:03:00 PM) Post reply
  Glad you like it

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