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Lamis Fahal . Female, 19, Sudan, Republic of (9/2/2012 6:27:00 PM)

Please read my poems and comment
Here is one

He made her happy
He made her fly
But she turned him down
So will he ever try
She was so scared
He will break her heart
Not to do that he sweared
But still she push them apart
She was too shy
To edmitt to her self
He wondered why
He thinks she doesn't love him
But he is all that's on her mind
all night and all day
Their conversations she rewind
But still deny what her heart say
She is afraid
Her heart will be broken
And no one will come to her aid
And to the harsh reality she will be woken
She won't let go of her shell
Not matter how. Hard he tries to break through
So will she allow her self in to his love well
Or will he move on without the love he never knew
Will let her go
Like many others and lose hope
Or will he fight to know
The deep love that he will cherish and protect..

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  • Rookie Cindy Cato (9/6/2012 11:09:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    Your words are deep I love it :)

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  • Rookie Kayla Marie (9/4/2012 5:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Wow! Awesome poem!

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