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Rylie Shoop Female, 17, United States (7/16/2011 4:32:00 PM)

Hey :) This is a poem I wrote when I had lost a love only because of our distance. Comment, message, and look at my other poems, please! Tell me your opinions :)

I only long to be near you.
I only yearn just to feel the touch of you on my skin.
And this is the only more that I can do.
I can only long, yearn, and wish for you.
The night you told me it was over, was a stab in the heart.
My heart ached, 'Oh, woe is me.'
My brain screamed, 'Can this be true? '
My whole body shaking from head to toe from this traumatic experience.
Grabbing the nearest thing to me I cried.
Tears flowed out like a new Spring morning.
Spring tears.
Coming early into the year.
No stopping them.
No telling when they will come again.
Just know that when you come knocking again on the door towards true love,
I will be ever-so-cautious and hesitant once again.
For I have lost the love that I love the most,
to distance.

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  • Virginia Pecho Gely (12/27/2011 1:18:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. Please take care of your heart...A very wonderful ode to a lost love.

  • Shilesha Johnson (7/30/2011 7:26:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    This poem truly moved me. Me and my ex broke up in June because of distance and I relate to this so much. I actually cried because it brought me back to the day we broke up. Beautiful

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    • Klaire Flores (8/17/2011 5:52:00 PM) Post reply Stage

      That's why I hate long distance relationships it can really affect u.

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