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  • Melissa Robinson (1/1/2014 4:58:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    LUST

    I stare into your eyes and I'm in a trance,
    lets let go of innocence.
    I am unable to hold myself back any longer,
    I press myself against your lips.

    Body to body, raging in lust;
    Nothing feels more intense than your trembling touch.
    Embrace your desire, manhandle me love;
    Seductive by nature~ sharp and clean cut.

    A new, short poem of mine. Please check it out, rate and comment.! All criticism welcomed.

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    • Daniel Brick Freshman - 2nd Stage (1/10/2014 4:54:00 PM) Post reply

      I read your poem several times before typing out the comments. This poem has visceral impact which is one of the key qualities of good poetry. Of course, the situation you're relating is literally vi ... more

  • Abhinav Jain (12/19/2013 11:27:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi,

    Great poem Nancy. Salute to sailor there.

    Please read my poems, they are very small. Suggestions more than welcome.

  • Nancy Cruz-ayala (12/14/2013 8:26:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Please read this new poem I submitted for my son who is serving.
    Son, as my sailor, it was time for you to leave to take care of your duties overseas

    My heart felt like it was broken in little pieces. Knowing to see you, touch you, hug you, see that beautiful smile of yours, and simply see you taking naps in our couch will be impossible made my eyes just watery

    As the limo pulled over to pick you up in that dark morning day, I wanted to just hold you and not let you go, but you had a goal for yourself

    As the man I saw leave for that limo dressed in that spotless, well ironed, white uniform with black shiny shoes, looking charm and handsome and all grown up

    I felt more than a happy mom, I was proud, excited but at the same time the little pieces of my broken heart started to get back together again only my thoughts were a lot clearer

    My emotions knew that when you come back from being away, you will be back as a handsome, brave, mature, full with stories to share, and most important with a strong arm to hold, hug, touch and know that while you are away my son, Mom is here waiting for you to get home with open arms

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    • Wyclif Odira Freshman - 2nd Stage (12/31/2013 11:16:00 PM) Post reply

      hi Nancy, that's a nice poem..please check out my postings and comment..happy new year dear

  • Yogini Dawar Rookie - 1st Stage (12/8/2013 11:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Guys please read my new poem " A Successful Life ahead..." I hope that it will motivate u'll...& fill u'll with Positivity.
    & best of Luck guys for all your awesome poems.: -)
    May God Bless u'll.

  • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (12/1/2013 5:45:00 PM) Post reply

    Kindly rate and give comments any of my 10 poems. Just message then I will do the same in return
    God bless you all Poets and Readers

  • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (11/28/2013 9:12:00 PM) Post reply

    " Your Love is Like the Planets in the Universe" Please rate and comment

  • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (11/28/2013 9:11:00 PM) Post reply

    Kindly read my poem " I'm In Love With YOU"

  • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (11/28/2013 9:08:00 PM) Post reply

    Kindly read my new poem " JUST A FRIEND"

  • Herbert Guitang Rookie - 1st Stage (11/28/2013 9:02:00 PM) Post reply

    Please read my poems with high appreciations to you.

  • Mary Amrutha Rookie - 1st Stage (11/20/2013 6:29:00 AM) Post reply

    Can You Help Me?

    I couldn't keep going on like this
    any more, not any more.
    I am out of my mind,
    I really am,
    what to do?
    I am totally out of my mind
    I really am
    Can you help me
    to run away from this situation
    this bloody damn one...

    Mary Amrutha

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