(9/16/2013 1:59:00 AM)
a wave of the hand to all fellow poets:
i am Molotov Najveci, also a fairly new member here.
pls show some love and i would be glad to do the same
(9/15/2013 6:00:00 PM)
A new member here. Please can you take time and criticize my poems. What is life?And I see a picture. Thanks for your appreciation and analysis.
(9/15/2013 5:00:00 AM)
Hello, I am a new member to Poemhunter.com and have introduced
two of my poems.
Autumn Waltz and Your Eyes
Take a look at your leisure.
Ebuka Prince Okoroafor
(9/15/2013 4:20:00 AM)
Hey friends.poetry is life, everything from the air to breath to the intervolving joy everything.read my poems and constructively critisize it.thanks
(9/14/2013 11:28:00 PM)
Hie! my love for poetry made me join this wonderful site and I wonder if the other members could spare a little time reading my poems. All comments are welcome!
(9/14/2013 5:09:00 PM)
I felt a knife
Through my life
That's the past.
(9/14/2013 12:54:00 AM)
behind the earth's long summoning pale
falls to evening dappled light
day's contingent feats and flounderings
bid adieu to wandering light
fate's forebodings yet unknown
turning cards find kismet's claim
metronomic shadows rising
guide our eyes to dreams once more
(9/13/2013 11:32:00 AM)
One Day At a Time=Everlasting Life
A journey starts with one step
A building gets built brick by brick
A lifetime begins with one day
One day your eyes open and see
One true light to follow
One loving guide to believe in
To a life of peace, joy and happiness
To a mind full of wisdom and understanding
To a soul that is at rest and free
Through pain, God's will gives strength
Through trials, He will show you patience and endurance
Through tribulation, follow Him to the mountain top
It is just one choice of obedience
It is just one belief in self sacrifice
It is just one step on a true foundation
You can take one step to begin a journey
You can finish that journey and realize God's glory
You can see God in heaven with life eternal
Take that one step in that one day
One day at a time to complete a life's journey
For one life believing will lead to one life everlasting
(9/13/2013 11:11:00 AM)
I have really just found my still small voice again. It has been inspired by a journey I began about 11 mths. ago. And I have been blessed to find a place where I can share in so much talent and true vision. I use this sight to find edifying poetry for a group of men that have made some bad choices and are looking to step out and begin new way of thinking through spiritual means. They have made a choice to follow Jesus and in doing so seeking that knowledge and understanding that will take them from superficial " I need a blessing" belief to a spirit building " I want to be a Blessing" belief.
So as I learn how to submit my poetry and the poetry of some of these guys, please feel free to comment, coach, advise, and encourage as we go down this pathway together.
(9/12/2013 9:59:00 PM)
Hello, my name is Dimitri jagodinski. I want to thank all the poets and readers who have read my poems for the comments and the time. I am starting to participate more in this community because I like the format. So I will begin to review more poems and participate more on this site/ I thank you because I feel it is a privilage to write and an honor to be reviewed objectively. If my poems are good please by all means give me a great review. however if they are terrible please by all means tell me if i need to reread my poem and work on it. That means more than anything, and that is knowing people are really reading your work and being honest about the reviews. I again thank you all.