(12/18/2013 9:08:00 PM)
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Hello everyone. I'm new to the site and I'm just sort of navigating my way around trying to learn the site. I'm going to start posting some of my poems shortly and I would love it if you all could give me some honest critiques and review them for me. I figure it's time to start getting some objective point of views. So far I've been told my work is pretty good but I think it's time to get some real opinions from people who can give me some experienced feedback and ratings. Thanks in advance
(12/17/2013 12:46:00 PM)
I haven't had very many people read my poems. I would greatly appreciate it if you guys read my poems, rate, and comment on how you think
i did. Thank You.!
(12/16/2013 6:53:00 PM)
Well to do to all my new poet friends there's nothing like a poem to change the prevailing winds, always be positive in lending a hand it can only help your own poetry in the very end. i have been writing a little more than year and hope all enjoy my poems
(12/15/2013 3:32:00 PM)
Hello all you out there.
Have started posting some of my poems. Have always been writing and believe in sharing whatever we learn in order to make the world a better place. By sharing we may reach a better understanding of each other. Hope you enjoy the poems.
(12/13/2013 8:26:00 PM)
Hello - all respected poets oh PH, in the recent past I have written some poems with some message in it, You may read them 1) ONE WORLD WITH ONE RACE 2) SONNET: RARE BREED.& 3) SALVATION & 4) UP TO YOU.And at the end give your valuable comments along with ratings. I'd love to have your comments.
REPEAT- PL. DO READ MY POEMS, I'm sure that you'll not be disappointed.
keep well with peace & happiness,
(12/13/2013 5:45:00 PM)
Hey I'm kinda new here I would love it if you checked out my poems. Thanx
(12/9/2013 10:51:00 PM)
Hey I'm Thomas Ware. I've been on Poemhunter, posting poems for something like a year, two years. I just never really discovered the forum until now, I'm not much for forums. I have about 35 poems published, which is only the poems I thought were worthy of being put on the internet. I've written like 15 or so others that I deemed not good enough and scrapped. Please come check out my profile and comment, rate. I'd love some constructive criticism. However if you don't like morbid or dark stuff don't torture yourself, that's my main subject matter. Thanks for reading this.
(12/6/2013 12:33:00 PM)
i am paapa esuman... i write what i see and feel within and around me... got more interesting poems try to read them.
success they said can be found in education
that is the only master key
to develop and build a wealthy nation
but that is not free
the impoverish can't afford it
only attained in schools
acquired by financially fit
only comes out to be fools
forgetting wisdom supersedes all
knowledge gotten through learning
ignorance makes them fall
failing to receive understanding
wisdom brings authority
power remains knowledge
education seeks vanity
leaving you in bondage
wisdom is not in the classrooms
neither found in schools
we sweep it always with brooms
and remain fools
wisdom lie waste on the street
reaching men to be wise
calls out with special treat
for fools to rise
letting them shine to His glory
and humbles the pride
they tell a new story
and forget the tears they 've cried
wisdom remains the creator's gift
gotten from life lessons
not meant for the subtle and swift
to the humble is a blessing
seek wisdom more than education
to build a great empire
not a wealthy nation
wisdom should be our greatest desire
(12/6/2013 3:37:00 AM)
Hey am Amrutha.I'm from kerala.
I love writing poems like you all do
(12/5/2013 3:12:00 PM)
Hello. I am new here and just walking around to imbibe the rarefied air. I am being fitted into a round peg for Key Difference and I needed the breather. Please feel free to comment on my poems. In fact, I would appreciate constructive criticism. This could be a mutual thing. Don't be surprised by the age - I am a reincarnation of a long line of writers (majority of whom are poets, some are cats) . Thank you.