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  • Susan Lacovara (11/4/2013 5:54:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Words are powerful....poet friends....a peaceful greeting, to those who share this forum. My name is Susan Lacovara from Long Island, New York in the United States of America. I invite all, into the yellowing pages of my lifelong love affair with poetry. I, with honest enthusiasm and appreciation, will welcome, and respond to your comments.
    I hope that within my writings, you feel comfortable enough to stay awhile...linger...and maybe even return. I have long considered putting together a collection of my poetry, and an odd assortment of various letters penned... perhaps finding the gem that is Poemhunter will serve as my starting point. The poems I have submitted here, are mostly new...within my decades of countless books, hundreds upon hundreds of older poems await their being set a proverbial time capsule, well preserved....and if I were granted Aladdin' s Lamp...I wish you to PEACE.

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    • Anthony Burkett (1/31/2014 10:20:00 PM) Post reply

      If you ever do put together that collection of your penned work... I would welcome a signed copy as a treasured possession.

    • Debdip Maitra (11/9/2013 1:00:00 PM) Post reply Read and review my works plz

  • Eliseo 'elcid' Cinco Iii (11/3/2013 3:55:00 AM) Post reply

    I am an aspiring boo-author and right now I need feedback on the poems I composed.Thanks.

  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 10:46:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi, Poemhunter community. I am between old and new but I would like to come outside into light. I would like you who is reading these sentences to please crawl through my poems and give me some thumb ups or down. Thank you.

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  • Shreyan Roy (11/1/2013 7:09:00 AM) Post reply

    hello everybody...i hope you would like my oems and give feedback....

  • Jitu Jitu (10/31/2013 12:38:00 PM) Post reply

    hi all

    Just entered the amazing world of poetry. Would be great if some of you can read my first poem and say what you like/not like about it.
    read here

  • Herbert Guitang (10/30/2013 11:42:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello Honorable Poets. Kindly Read, rate, vote and comment my New Poem " I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU"

  • Ella Pitt (10/30/2013 11:22:00 AM) Post reply

    I'm relatively new to poemhunter and definitely open to ideas and points of improvement. If anyone would be willing to check out/critique my poems particularly I am Cooked, Rubies and Garnets and The Perfectionist I will be eternally grateful!

  • Kaylin Ruth Adarne (10/30/2013 7:27:00 AM) Post reply

    Fading Moments

    I‘d cut my nails, tie my hair, and check myself in the mirror twice
    All I know is I ought to look nice
    To please you, though it’s as clear the blue skies that I don’t have to
    Cause you like the exact reflection in the mirror and not the way people want me to

    Then we would meet at your simple and loving place
    Where we’d talk and play simple tunes
    Then you’d blush and smile when I look at your face
    And to your eyes, as bright as the moon

    Our fingers would touch slightly and softly
    Would give me shivers that I want to linger
    But I’d hold my heart back and smile at the thought shyly
    For all I know, we’re just kids and nothing would go deeper

    Sometimes we’d sit at the sofa and watch a movie
    And I noticed how shy, quiet, and serious you are from a small distance
    Those were the times that I tried to move closely
    It’s sad. No matter how small of a distance would fade all the chance

    The day you asked me to go with you to a sacred place
    A hangout that I’d always remember till this day
    When I felt the most scared and awkward of all times
    I knew you want me to be closer to Him and I want you to be mine

    In my mind it stayed as a memory flashing back every now and then
    There are times I would smile
    There are moments I would cry
    It’s hard to accept the fact that those are just memories remembered then forgotten

    Days went by as quiet as the air, the vision of you became a blur
    Can’t remember exactly how you turned into such a “nobody” in the end
    If ever I’ll have your touch again, I am not sure
    All the times we spent for now are just fading moments

    please I need criticisms..thank you

  • Kaylin Ruth Adarne (10/30/2013 6:43:00 AM) Post reply

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    Hi! I am Kaylin from Philippines! I am struggling poet not perfect in grammar and hungry for knowledge and criticims. I have been so inlove with words so much.

  • Brandon Carter (10/29/2013 8:42:00 PM) Post reply

    Hello my name is Brandon Carter and I am 17 years old
    I dont know how I became so pulled into poetry but I love it
    I love writing dark, twisted and very deep poem but in the further
    future I want to become a famous Allan Edgar Pollen.

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