(12/14/2012 7:51:00 AM)
Check this out peeps, though a little rough...your advice and criticism is would go a long way to smoothen my writings...
Quietly bending my pride,
for you to become my bride
so as to have a smooth ride
till a child comes our way.
Take this not as dried
or too crunchy fried.
But rather be mild,
and see me as wild
with no where to hide
'trying to pass the tide
created by your dad...'
(12/13/2012 10:06:00 PM)
Hi Im Gary...kind of new to the site, any takers on reading my work?" Thy Hunts Mans Hound" , I like this one...any feedback would be greatly appreciated...When I can will return the favor.
(12/13/2012 11:18:00 AM)
hi, I am vikas chandra, a 3rd year engineering student from INDIA. I have been doing poetry from quite a long time and till now i have been showing my poetry skills at www.touchtalent.com - India's largest online portal for art and talent. I would like you all to come and see some of my art there. Now its time for me to showcase the same on international platform and who other than poemhumter can provide me this opportunity?I would look for a good interaction with you all and also will be waiting for your valuable comments.
(12/12/2012 4:57:00 PM)
Hello, this is my first time on this site. I just posted a few poems, and would love criticism of any kind. Thanks for the time.
(12/12/2012 3:58:00 PM)
Hello PoemHunter members,
My name is William LameBull, called " Frenchy" by my friends.
A friend named Tony from Thoughts.com told me of this site and even though computer illiterate I managed to get here and sign up as a new member.
I look forward to reading the poetry and prose herein posted.
(12/8/2012 5:39:00 AM)
Falling asleep with you on my mind.Awaken from a dream of you knowing now theirs no escaping this love that shall be a dream of you! ! ! ! ! ! !
(12/8/2012 5:33:00 AM)
Hello There! ! I would to start by telling that I love poetry I like to dabble in it mine our usally short and sweet! ! !
(12/7/2012 11:30:00 PM)
hi friends..romance is in my blood..i cant separate myself writing romantic poems..i only need your attention to generate the feeling of friendship with you all..thus all those who are reading this do visit my page once and read my love ladden poems and i bet you all will like them
thank you very much..DO VISIT ONCE
Dimu Eric Olowoparija
(12/6/2012 1:00:00 AM)
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Hello fellow poets my name is Dimu Eric Olowoparija. Am new here and would be needing the assistance of u guys to develop my writing skill. basically, i am interested in all poetry forms. believe u'll see some of my poems and u are free to criticise it, thanksReplies for this message:
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Gideon Zerah Ogbonna
(12/1/2012 5:05:00 PM)
Helo i need your around here check out my poems