(10/1/2012 9:30:00 AM)
i greet you all.i have been a member for some time now but i have never visited your forum and that has been the reason why i had not posted any poem. but i promise to post a poem very soon and hope you all will do justice to it by your great comments.thanks.
(10/1/2012 3:00:00 AM)
Be gentle.......what do you think?
Like a Boss
She wants to see the base of his throat as he throws his head back to laugh
She wants to taste the salty ocean air on her lips and hear her own soft whimper as he bends to kiss her.
She wants to feel him whisper sweet, crazy words close to her ear and delight in the hidden shivers he brings to the depths of her
She wants to let the heat from his hand burn her thigh
She wants to pull his sweet breath inside her chest and hold it until she knows it has travelled to the centre of her.
She wants permission to stand close...very close...
Can he tell that his name starts deep inside her and rings and rings and rings?.......
Then she opens her eyes and, ever ladylike, crosses her legs, hands folded over her knees, as the world comes back to focus
She wonders if this too shall pass
So she can get back to work!
(9/30/2012 6:17:00 PM)
Okay guys! Its that time again in which I let you send me
at least 2 of your favorite poems, and I will rate them and comment on them.
Don't be afraid, its only my opinion. Send me a message, I will be waiting. Have a great day or night.
(9/28/2012 6:05:00 PM)
I am brand spanking new here! I just posted a poem i wrote maybe 15 to 20 years ago (can i be that old?) should've dated it at the time, but didn't! anyway it was a moment in time. Feel free to read / rate / comment (scared!) .
(9/27/2012 3:50:00 AM)
I am a newbie and learning to find my way around here. Good day to all!
(9/26/2012 8:47:00 PM)
Hey, I'm new here and I was wondering if I could get some criticism on my poetry. I'm always looking to improve and I'd really appreciate the help. Thanks. :)
(9/26/2012 6:16:00 PM)
Here I am again guys, just wanted to let you know, I am back on duty, feel free to send me at least two of your
Favorite poems that you have written and I will accordingly rate them and comment on them to the best of my ability.
Have a great day.
(9/25/2012 2:43:00 AM)
I am a new member and have contributed few of my works. I would really appreciate your suggestions.
Please visit: http://www.poemhunter.com/vikrant-jog/
(9/24/2012 3:44:00 AM)
Cordially invite all of you to go through some of my humble contributions and put your valuable comments on them.
(9/22/2012 7:01:00 AM)
Hello. Good day to all. I am a new member here. Please read some of the poems I have written and I need (badly need) constructive criticisms. (I also accept destructive. I am a poet, I have an open mind)