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..... W@king Up..... ..... W@king Up..... Female, 14, Armenia (6/10/2013 6:12:00 PM)

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Hi Joey :) this was a wonderful poem! I enjoyed reading it :) all I say is perhaps you adjust some of the lines a little so they have more rhythm, and it will be pure perfection: D

-Wu

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  • Z.i. Mahmud (6/13/2013 9:45:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi! This is a wonderful piece of poetry!

  • Joey Jones (6/11/2013 3:30:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Thank you Wu. I am always revisiting and tweaking so maybe soon I'll come back to this one. Thank so much for reading it and commenting.

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