Teen Poetry and Discussions

What do you think?

Oath to dreams

A soothing voice is hard to embrace
When you feel undeserved of its grace
The sweetness of her fruit is hard to taste
From guilt embedded within your shame
Lies upon lies built your heavenly estate
For her to enjoy and believe that her fate
Lie within your lies and truth distorted
And reality is a scenery she surely hates
So we sit and imagine a hopeful dream
As dreams are surely better than what awaits

Syed Mowla

Tell me what you think!
Visions

I close my eyes and invision a place where I'm in your arms and the world spins faster around us while we stay still. The rain falls down but we don't hear a sound. Not the war could tear us apart. The floor could break giving way to hell. But my eyes are still staring trapped in your gaze. You cast a shadow on me that makes me tremble with puzzlement. I feel safe. Your skin is warm and your eyes longing for something more. You whisper something that stops me dead in my tracks. I look and match your gaze as we lock and stare into relazation of each others souls for the first time.

can you all read and comment on my poem
anything for you my enemy
autobiography and
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thanks

hey buddies
earlier i used to write onl romance piece but gradually i have shifted my genre and tried something new which seem to be better.
I think you should read my poems once and ponder over them
do not forget to comment.
thanks.

I have a penchant for reading and writing. My elation and passions all lie in arts. I read in class IX and am the topper in English.

Hey people :) Love poetry but i think i'm kinda bad: (my friends says im the edger allen poe in our school but... Idk :) try reading something. I hope you like it :)

Hey I'm Ash and love writing, however I don't know if I'm any good so if you could read my poetry on Suicidal Happiness and please let me know! ! ! ! !
Thank you
xo Peace Love
Ash

Hi everbody....I am Rabia,18 years old.i have been writing for 3 years.English is not my native language but still I have recieved some appreciation recently.Please, read and comment my poems.I will respect your suggestions :)

Hi
I'm Sophia Engel and I come from Germany but live in Sydney
I was wondering wether you could give me some feedback about my poems Of All People You Deserve It Not and Poverty
Thank You! ! !

Hey guys, I'm Savannah. I'm 17 from Chicago. Going to college for film. Feel free to check out my poems =)