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  • Indranil Bhaduri (9/18/2012 12:05:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Respected Members,
    Cordially invite all of you to kindly read some of my humble contributions here and put your valuable comments.
    http://www.poemhunter.com/indranil-bhaduri/
    Warm regards, Indranil

  • Briana Renn (9/17/2012 7:55:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    Hey, I'm Briana and i just turned 15. I would really apreciate it if you read my poem and gave me your opinion. Thanks, have a great day!

  • Cierrah Smiles (9/15/2012 1:12:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    hey people can everyone please read my poems

  • Lamis Fahal . (9/5/2012 2:00:00 PM) Post reply | Read 2 replies Stage

    Hey can u plz give ur opinion on my poem bcz I want to improve my writings.. So if u have any comments I would love to read them and u can check some more

    He made her happy
    He made her fly
    But she turned him down
    So will he ever try
    She was so scared
    He will break her heart
    Not to do that he sweared
    But still she push them apart
    She was too shy
    To edmitt to her self
    He wondered why
    He thinks she doesn't love him
    But he is all that's on her mind
    all night and all day
    Their conversations she rewind
    But still deny what her heart say
    She is afraid
    Her heart will be broken
    And no one will come to her aid
    And to the harsh reality she will be woken
    She won't let go of her shell
    Not matter how. Hard he tries to break through
    So will she allow her self in to his love well
    Or will he move on without the love he never knew
    Will let her go
    Like many others and lose hope
    Or will he fight to know
    The deep love that he will cherish and protect..


    Please leave your comments :) :) ;)

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  • Jean Triumfante (9/5/2012 7:47:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi to you all. i am new member. :)

  • Shivani Pillai (9/4/2012 11:10:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hi! I am Shivani pillai I am just a begginner in poem writing . So I don't know how good my poems are. I would be very glad if you would read my poems and write comments on it. PLS. do this as I am desperate to know what the world thinks of my poetry.

    WITH LOVE,
    Shivani Pillai

  • Rishab Parakh (8/27/2012 8:16:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hey! i'm new here so please help me promote my poems.... it would be very delighted if u help me...

    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/women-76/
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/strange-33/
    http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/tear-drop-from-heaven/

    Thank you!

  • Anthony Han (8/26/2012 5:31:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    Hey there I have been on the site for 3 years now. Please come read my poems and comment feedback or message. I tend to use my own style however: D

  • Garrett Richardson (8/8/2012 2:36:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply Stage

    Hello, I'm new to the website. I am looking for some advice on writing poetry. I have 2 poems posted so far, however i am unsure of how good my poems are compared to those of other members, if anyone could read them and give me some feedback i'd really appreciate it. Thank you.

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  • Freddy Ibarra (8/4/2012 9:23:00 PM) Post reply Stage

    my style differs. I write in variety. I like playing with words so visit my page, read my poetry, comment, rate.
    http://www.poemhunter.com/freddy-ibarra/

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