Teen Poetry and Discussions
(10/25/2012 1:12:00 PM)
New to poem hunter i've posted three poems so far and would be very appreciative if anybody cares to take a look. I'm also very open to criticism and suggestion
(10/23/2012 6:32:00 AM)
hi this is yash shinde from India.............I am new to this site...........so I need the help of great poets like you to excel.......please do read my poems and comment., ........: -)
(10/22/2012 4:27:00 PM)
Hi, my name is...well, Daniel Einstein, I have been in this site for a decent amount of time and I always ask you
Guys to send me a private message with at least two of your favorite poems that you have written. I will read them, and promptly comment or rate depending on
the poem. I hope to hear from you guys soon.
(10/19/2012 7:32:00 AM)
Hello to all of you. Hope you are doing well. There is a humble request to you to read some of my poems and dropp your comments on them! I hope you'll like them.PLEASE RATE AND COMMENT!
(10/12/2012 12:33:00 PM)
please if anyone can give me a speech on any 1 of these
the world of machines is the death of heart
we will have to change ourselves for our country's promotion
please help. i need this urgently.
(10/8/2012 1:58:00 PM)
well conna i love your poems maybe think of coming a writer
(10/8/2012 1:57:00 PM)
on the beach side just sitting there me and i under the sun letting the sun hitting my golden skin
just me and i letting the water hit my feet, feeling the saltyness of from the cool water.
just me and i
(10/7/2012 11:36:00 PM)
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Hi everyone! I'm trying to become a poet but I'm having trouble starting. Anyone want to give me some advice, tips anything?!Replies for this message:
(10/19/2012 7:27:00 AM)
Poetry is nothing but just our imagination...! Write mostly everything whatever comes to your mind anytime! Keep a pen and paper with you so that you can write the thing coming into your mind that tim ... more
(10/14/2012 4:24:00 AM)
HI! There is no hard and fast rule to be a poet. Poetry is nothing but the expression of the spontaneous feelings of heart and mind. so the best way is to just give words to the expressions of you ... more
(10/13/2012 3:39:00 AM)
Hi kourtney?I got this from the internet. It helps me too. 1. Inspiration; raindrops, sunshine, mountains, love, just see whats around u. 2. Information, you'ld have to know more about ur main subj ... more
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(10/1/2012 5:24:00 PM)
Hello everyone I'm Conna 17 iv just written a few new poems and would love to know what you think of them I will read and rate yours if you send me the link I only have 3 short ones on there at the moment and just wanted a few different views please
(9/25/2012 4:23:00 PM)
Hi, I'd like to know what you all think of my poem " The Artisan Knight" .
Here I am, the gallant knight,
trapped in a room where I cannot fight.
Here I am silent and still,
gazing out the windowsill.
I paint the world outside my cell,
dragons and demons fight as well
as the battles raging in my head,
the harrowing feeling that I might be dead.
I let my brush sweep the skies,
I build a world full of whys.
Dizzily, I speckle stars
and give new life to planet Mars.
But footsteps break me from my page,
I pace inside the mental cage,
my mind is melting with my brush,
its colours dulled, no longer lush.
I hear them calling out my name
but I must paint just one more frame,
dripping down across the sheet,
I let the colour stain my feet.
One with art and art has won,
I'm done, dear god, at last I'm done.
I cannot take the pain much more,
the voice who screams, my mind so sore.
So here I am, the gallant knight,
who has long since lost his final fight.
Here I am, my mind a flood,
painting pretty pictures with blood.