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  • Rookie - 60 Points Pankti Vadalia (9/17/2014 11:50:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    Sometimes in life..u need a pill..you know what it's called??..it's called the " hope-pill" ... it's really effective! it can cure u of any pain..it can make you the happiest person!
    But..as we know..all good things come at a cost..so this pill, that's very unusual for an ordinary person, but a routine for a person who knows how to LIVE a life, is a bit hard to obtain.
    You don't get it in the market..nor can anybody gift it to you..you have to search for it on your own, and take the dose according to your wish n capability..
    so I'll tell u how I found my " hope-pill" ...


    I was lost..i didn't know what to do, where to go, what to think... In fact I didn't even know if my life was worth living...Then I resolved to do something for myself.
    On that night in search of some peace, i went to get some fresh air. I felt really nice...

    I mean a dark night it was. But the moon didn't hesitate to fight the darkness! It tried with all its might, and at last brought light! Wow, I wondered how special it would have felt!
    And yes, the stars! ! I have always LOVED stars as they always teach me something unique!
    Yeah so though they knew that the moon was nearer to me than them, they showed up..They told me that if you are capable, you can show your ability from anywhere...
    Then they also showed me the mentality of most us-that we always tend to hesitate to express ourselves in front of someone very superior to us...So consequently most of the stars disappeared because of the powerful brightness that the moon had...Some stars even ran away from the moon, fearing they will get lost...

    But then I saw a star...It was a normal, ordinary star..Just like the others..but there was some magic in it; you know what that magic was?It was the magic of self-belief...it didn't get scared and was standing just next to the moon, because it knew how capable it was.
    I was shocked to see the brightness of that ordinary star even wen it was standing next to the source of such powerful light..
    And then, none of the moon, or the stars, or the aeroplanes that visited the night sky frequently, accepted their defeat against that dark night! They all fought, n that's why they succeeded!
    And the wind...it cant see through the night..But still, it never fails in spreading its magic!

    So all these elements present in the nature..they don't just exist for the sake of existing...They exist so that WE can exist..They are for us..they are always ready to teach us the greatest lessons of life...All we need to do is-observe carefully and listen to those silent words...
    Paks

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  • Gold Star - 15,145 Points John Westlake (9/15/2014 5:19:00 AM) Post reply

    Very nice poem. It's a pity that you won't post your poems on the main site. More people will be able to enjoy your work if you do

  • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/10/2014 1:30:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Lets still write to educate as well as to entertain the world. Keep it up all you writers!

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    • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points John Westlake (9/11/2014 2:26:00 AM) Post reply

      I would say both are extremely important, as long as it it done in the right way

  • Gold Star - 21,309 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/9/2014 4:45:00 AM) Post reply

    Poetry for teens and students requires more importance in creation and easy to recite and understand meanings.

  • Rookie - 11 Points Carter Nedax (9/5/2014 11:25:00 PM) Post reply | Read 4 replies

    warning: it may be a little dark.

    Pain don't increase,
    In vain i ask " may i be released?"
    love come in like a dove
    But please don't come from above.
    I know where I am, but not where I land.
    Please pain... Just refrain.

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  • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/2/2014 4:54:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hellow fellow great hunters,
    I have just submitted my new poem entitled- I TOO, SING POETRY. please check it out and comment on it. Rate is always important! Thank you all!

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    • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points John Westlake (9/8/2014 3:55:00 PM) Post reply

      Have not forgotten about you. You are on list of people to read before the end of the year. Have faith and I will get to you

  • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points Abekah Emmanuel (9/2/2014 1:28:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Thank you mr.Westlake for your kind response, i am personally grateful for this advice. Indeed we are many here and so one must be smart enough to get the desired attention...I particularly dont mind how many people visit my page but how many people get touched by my message....I want every message of mine to be clear as possible. All the same, thank you. Let me also alert you of my new poem...ACCEPT MINE TOO....this time, a gratitude to the creator. Pleaae read it and comment on it....thank you all...

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    • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points John Westlake (9/2/2014 4:02:00 PM) Post reply

      Sir. The more poems you read, the more you may get noticed. I will read some of your poems and can inform other members of your work. That's easy enough for me to do. Whether they will read is up ... more

  • Veteran Poet - 2,853 Points Abekah Emmanuel (8/29/2014 5:15:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hello fellow young hunters, it is a pleasure to always meet you here. I hope you are all doing good.... I wish to inform you that i have done a few renovations on my new poem...GOOD MORNING! Please check it out and enjoy. Dont forget to rate and comment. Thank you all!

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  • Rookie - 297 Points Frederick James Bradley Moore (8/28/2014 8:08:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    CHANGING THE WORLD

    changing the world
    is never an easy task

    because the minds of man never want to change
    but if you are crazy enough to try
    then others will be crazy eough to follow

    to change the world
    you dont have to be perfect
    all you need is an idea
    worth sharing and worth following

    to change the world
    your heart has to be into it
    you can`t half step what you do
    or everything will fall apart

    change, my friends
    is a great weapon
    one that everyman fears
    and some seek to avoid
    so beware that not everyone
    will change with you
    they are the lost ones

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to hold your tongue
    and bear your arms

    to change the world
    you must be wise enough
    to speak of peace
    and surrender for your cause

    if you change the world in anyway
    you will be persecuted
    because man always fears
    anything he cant understand

    to change the world
    you need a foundation behind you
    that will encourage you to keep pushing the world
    when your broken and exausted

    to change the world
    your first step has to be yourself
    because you are the greatest catalyst for change
    and the greatest challenge to tradtion

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  • Rookie - 648 Points Hannah Bp (8/28/2014 5:02:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey guys, I'm a bit new to Poem Hunter and I would love it if anyone would read my poems. I would greatly appreciate feedback or constructive criticism. [They are pretty much the same thing but you get the idea.]

    Thank you!

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    • Rookie - 648 Points John Westlake (8/28/2014 7:07:00 PM) Post reply

      Your name is on my list of poets that I need to read. I will (given time) read ALL of your poems and comment on as many as I can. I give my word on that. Profanisaurus

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