Teen Poetry and Discussions
(8/17/2014 4:03:00 AM)
hi guys! Please check out my spoken word below
Let me know what you think! : -) Advice appreciated! ! ! ! !
(8/8/2014 12:34:00 AM)
Out of control
We broke the chains that tied us whole
A fire inside us, it melts our words
Every secret has its own truth
The more we keep it, the more it shows
I'm not saying the words that are right
And you keep doing actions that you hate
The brain collides the beats of the heart
Though it will not pause, more it will not stop
Same question plays when we lie in our bed
Rather to eject it, we load more instead
We can't kill the living pictures in our head
Wake or sleep it stays as we live
But one thing pushes us to the wrong way
It keeps dividing us as we step
We want to look back but we're stiff necked
I have a thousand words to say
It's hard to let go all promises
Have to pretend you are gone and dead
Know you'll do the same thing as i did
(8/3/2014 12:40:00 PM)
An afrikaans poem me and a friend wrote...
enjoy if you understand it.
Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?
Hoe het sterre in die lug gekom?
Dis 'n baie moeilike som...
Kom ek vertel jou gou.
Dit was eers die kos van 'n pou
Dit was ongebore sterre
tussen blomme gebere.
Die geheimsinnige blom
het dit versteek onder sy tong.
Pou gaan haal sy kos in die suikerbos,
maar die saadjie laat los.
Stadig vlieg hy deur die fluitende wind
en gaan rus soos 'n lint
Aan die donker ruimte
aan die buitenste, buite.
Die kleinste, fynste saadjie was vreeslik bly,
want hy het ontsnap en is nou vry...
(8/3/2014 12:10:00 PM)
Sometimes I can be a real poetaster, but I enjoy writing poems, so I keep writing poems.
My friend wrote this poem:
You are very boring.
I just want to keep snoring.
I want to sleep
and I won't make a peep.
What can I do?
Maybe I can throw a shoe...
I am so bored
I can win a reward!
I want to cry,
but not fly!
I want to do something
it can't be nothing!
You are very cool,
so don't make me drool.
You are like a crook,
so stop reading that book! !
I want to play
don't take my fun away!
This is the end,
so goodbye my friend!
(7/24/2014 12:26:00 PM)
relish my poem embellished doll, share it with me, friends
(7/19/2014 10:38:00 AM)
I am new here... Please check out my new poem 'Stolen heart' _thanx
(6/19/2014 8:26:00 AM)
i have resently posted a poem called " Save The Falllen Beauties" please go and read/ comment :) thanks
(6/10/2014 4:11:00 PM)
Mix a dough of selfishness in a bowl
Pour in a cupful of vulgar lunguage and bullying,
Mix two days in dentention
Wait for four years.
Serve with a cupfull of tears.
(5/13/2014 8:11:00 AM)
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Peer out my window
Look out just to see
Gone has the white snow
Its finally done chasing me.
Winter has disappeared
Sun in the sky
The bitter cold I much fear
I wave the icy flakes goodbye.
The ground is warm
Now the perfect soil
Bees buzz and swarm
My plan no one can foil.
The grass is green
Rivers at their flow
Birds chirping I’ve seen
Oh so quite does the wind blow.
Plant all the seeds
Water them good
The flowers have their needs
I smiled where I stood
For what I looked upon
Was the most beautiful sight
Tea whistling at the dawn
The blooms swaying in delight.
The heaven that I speak of
Excepts every single pardon
As lovely as the dove
For this is my garden.
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(9/16/2014 4:55:00 AM)
Very nice and happy poem which is full of the joys of spring. Really liked this poem a lot and would love to visit that garden if I had the chance
Eesha Raaziah Naqvi
(7/16/2014 1:58:00 AM)
I enjoyed reading it! very well-rhymed indeed. keep it up please!
(5/21/2014 8:31:00 PM)
very well written! i like this one :)) Keep penning!
(5/19/2014 11:28:00 AM)
oh yes i cant believe i misspelled that! ... more
(5/18/2014 1:26:00 PM)
It sure is a warm, delicate poem. Very n ... more
- John Westlake (9/16/2014 4:55:00 AM) Post reply
(5/13/2014 12:16:00 AM)
A Crowned King
A single striking figure in the sky
Abandoned, alone, but flying high
He lands alone, on a roof that's near
His daring crow's song rings in my ear
Defiant, he stands there upon his throne
He cares not that his friends are done
In this harsh world he is all but forgotten
In this harsh world his strength is all too uncommon
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