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Kathleen Neff Kathleen Neff Female, 15, United States (10/11/2013 10:45:00 AM)

Black as night
Cold as ice
The darkness
can consume any in sight
Blind they are
to sight and sound
Until they fall from
the ground
Frozen they become
never to wake
until the night
Darkness they face
Reborn as none
Screaming and eating
the sun
Demons of shadows
Ice and night
Have come to take the light.

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  • Mughal Ssp (11/17/2013 11:27:00 AM) Post reply thanks for sharing

  • June Keysha (10/13/2013 9:04:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    you have a great talent in poem writing, i even can't write such a poem like that...

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    • Kathleen Neff (10/14/2013 10:06:00 AM) Post reply

      Thank you very much June. All I do is write what pops in my head or let my mind go blank and let my hands write down what they want. Any way if you just keep on trying and not give up you could right ... more

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