Critiques and Revision
April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate)
(11/13/2012 3:13:00 PM)
I need some critisism on some of my poems,
nunn of none
The bottle of no pain
I would feel better with some critism. Please help. Thanks! :)
(11/13/2012 8:09:00 AM)
I wish to improve my poems more... It has been while but please commenting with your precious advice...
(11/13/2012 2:06:00 AM)
I have been in poem hunter for quite some time and now after some success here in poem hunter, I wish for all those critiques to have a read and comment for I wish to know what each of you think. Thank you and have a great day.
(11/10/2012 3:21:00 AM)
Hello fellow poet, I humbly invite you to read my poems and leave a comment about them, would love more criticism dan praise.... And don't forget to vote... Thanks
Matthew Wilkinson Luck
(11/9/2012 7:35:00 AM)
To any and all who view this
I'm new to Poemhunter and new to the concept of sharing my poetry at all.
I would appreciate it if you viewed my poem " Teetering on the Edge" , or any of my other poems for that matter, if you could leave constructive criticism that would be
So thanks in advance
Leonardo David Tay
(11/9/2012 2:47:00 AM)
Hey guys, I just posted a poem called, " If You May..." I would love to hear some opinions, either bad or good, I just want to improve. Thanks.
(11/1/2012 11:13:00 PM)
I would love for you guys to read my new poem
and my poems entitled " Fallen Raven" and " Autumnal Love"
Thanks in advance for your time!
P.S. If you leave comments (which I hope you do, I want to get different opinions on my poetry) PLEASE be completely honest. If you didn't like it, tell me!
That's why I want different opinions :)
(11/1/2012 10:55:00 PM)
Hi uh I'm sort of new to this...
anyway please read my poem called " Confusion."
lol most awkward post ever.
(11/1/2012 12:31:00 AM)
Please read my 2 new poems
1. With tears flooding my pillow.
2. Within me.
Thanks a lot. It would be lovely to receive your views through comments or messages. Thanks.
God Bless :)
(10/23/2012 4:31:00 PM)
Please note that my new book of poetry, " Dada Reborn: 21st Century Poems, " is now available on Amazon (Ebook) .
These poems are intended for a mature liberal-minded audience.