Critiques and Revision
(11/17/2012 10:47:00 AM)
I am a poet
silently hidden in life's closet
with half-measured expressions
seeking to be made whole
secret imagination longing
to be bold
I am the wind
that echoes in your head
I am your reason
your silent unknown
(11/14/2012 5:35:00 AM)
hey guys hoping to get some honest opinions on my poems will be sure to read and comment on your poems in return xx
April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate)
(11/13/2012 3:13:00 PM)
I need some critisism on some of my poems,
nunn of none
The bottle of no pain
I would feel better with some critism. Please help. Thanks! :)
(11/13/2012 8:09:00 AM)
I wish to improve my poems more... It has been while but please commenting with your precious advice...
(11/13/2012 2:06:00 AM)
I have been in poem hunter for quite some time and now after some success here in poem hunter, I wish for all those critiques to have a read and comment for I wish to know what each of you think. Thank you and have a great day.
(11/10/2012 3:21:00 AM)
Hello fellow poet, I humbly invite you to read my poems and leave a comment about them, would love more criticism dan praise.... And don't forget to vote... Thanks
Matthew Wilkinson Luck
(11/9/2012 7:35:00 AM)
To any and all who view this
I'm new to Poemhunter and new to the concept of sharing my poetry at all.
I would appreciate it if you viewed my poem " Teetering on the Edge" , or any of my other poems for that matter, if you could leave constructive criticism that would be
So thanks in advance
Leonardo David Tay
(11/9/2012 2:47:00 AM)
Hey guys, I just posted a poem called, " If You May..." I would love to hear some opinions, either bad or good, I just want to improve. Thanks.
(11/1/2012 11:13:00 PM)
I would love for you guys to read my new poem
and my poems entitled " Fallen Raven" and " Autumnal Love"
Thanks in advance for your time!
P.S. If you leave comments (which I hope you do, I want to get different opinions on my poetry) PLEASE be completely honest. If you didn't like it, tell me!
That's why I want different opinions :)
(11/1/2012 10:55:00 PM)
Hi uh I'm sort of new to this...
anyway please read my poem called " Confusion."
lol most awkward post ever.