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Gareth Penny Male, 31, United Kingdom (12/22/2012 5:31:00 PM)

False Love

Have you ever wanted someone that they controlled what you did?
Have you ever chased something that turned out myth?
Have you ever had a reality that was not shared?
Have you ever felt magic that was not paired?
Did you see honesty within her when she looked in your eyes?
How did it feel when you knew it had been lies?
Have you ever felt that your world seemed complete?
How did it feel when it turned out a cheat?
Did you ever think someone could be so cold?
When you were warned by others,
But disagreed with the mould.
When you make a bed in your thoughts questioning how could this be?
Your chest feels heavy,
How could this happen to me?
When you look for her picture,
Scan you phone,
Are you all alone?
‘Stop it at once I say! ’
Just give it some time,
Open the curtains to a new pantomime.
For life holds so many wonders to be wrapped up in hurt,
So pick up your shoes,
And shake of the dirt.
Go to sleep each day,
When you awake it will feel better,
Soon you will look back,
And not regret that day when you met her.

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  • Denise Woodhouse (1/8/2013 1:24:00 PM) Post reply

    A very interesting poem. I especially like the phrase " ...when you make a bed in your thoughts..."

    Personally I would tweak the grammar in one or two places. Let me know if you'd like to hear my suggestions. Regards, Denise

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