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Abdul Sattar Swabi / Pakistan, Male, 38
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Abdul Sattar's last comments on poems and poets

  • (2/17/2007 6:53:00 AM)

    Only Love and only love can make it beautiful. A nice and beautiful poem.

  • POEM: View by Hope Light (2/17/2007 6:25:00 AM)

    When the mountains touch the skies
    --The cloud hug the mountain and cry--

    A very nice picture of nature and emotions.

  • POEM: Lost Heart by Hope Light (2/17/2007 6:18:00 AM)

    A very good poem about the natural beauty. Nicely written, thanks for sharing.

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  • Abdul Sattar (1/12/2006 3:34:00 PM) Post reply

    Dear Hugh Cobb,

    Thanks for your good comments and edits. I need people like you to get me out of the trouble of making mistakes and unusual usage of words. I will keep it and will keep your message and comments as a good poetry lesson for me. Thanks.

    Abdul Sattar

  • Abdul Sattar (9/25/2005 1:35:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    It was then a few days before. I was out from my room at that night looking at sky gave me a touch of the nature. I was moved by the spraying light of the moon and compelled to converge my experiences but how I did it? Is that good one or not: Look at the poem below that I put on the paper and without amendment I am presenting it here:

    The Moon

    In the dark cold night
    The sky is full of golden rays
    Who can tell the truth behind the silence?
    What is the mystery of the cat walk?
    Which the silently gazing rays
    The fairy of universe is exposing
    To the little naked eye

    The still mode of the world
    Looks so beautiful at that moment
    No one to talk even a word or two
    Files shut and closed mouths
    Let the eyes to stare at the beauty queen
    This protocol of nature
    Gives her charms of limitless moments
    It is too early to go to bed
    For tonight is like the blessing of nature

    This untouched moment is so steady
    That the trees are whispering
    The stars are hiding their faces
    From being burnt to ashes
    By the flames of rising fire
    From the mouth of queen of solitude

  • Abdul Sattar (7/14/2005 8:43:00 PM) Post reply

    Good attempt thank you!

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