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(1/12/2006 3:34:00 PM)
Dear Hugh Cobb,
Thanks for your good comments and edits. I need people like you to get me out of the trouble of making mistakes and unusual usage of words. I will keep it and will keep your message and comments as a good poetry lesson for me. Thanks.
(9/25/2005 1:35:00 AM)
It was then a few days before. I was out from my room at that night looking at sky gave me a touch of the nature. I was moved by the spraying light of the moon and compelled to converge my experiences but how I did it? Is that good one or not: Look at the poem below that I put on the paper and without amendment I am presenting it here:
In the dark cold night
The sky is full of golden rays
Who can tell the truth behind the silence?
What is the mystery of the cat walk?
Which the silently gazing rays
The fairy of universe is exposing
To the little naked eye
The still mode of the world
Looks so beautiful at that moment
No one to talk even a word or two
Files shut and closed mouths
Let the eyes to stare at the beauty queen
This protocol of nature
Gives her charms of limitless moments
It is too early to go to bed
For tonight is like the blessing of nature
This untouched moment is so steady
That the trees are whispering
The stars are hiding their faces
From being burnt to ashes
By the flames of rising fire
From the mouth of queen of solitude
(7/14/2005 8:43:00 PM)
Good attempt thank you!