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Tinashe Severa mutare / Zimbabwe, Male, 28
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  • (4/4/2006 2:53:00 PM)

    a heart warming story of true love, told with much grace and poetic might.Im amazed by the amount of prowess you show, you do create rhyme naturally.The way this poem changes mood from the narration of the poor mans search for a gift to give his wife into her assurance that she does not need anything from him to prove his love, she is much blest by having him and that is more than enough.Such love has been found only by a lucky few on this earth.It is only those who have found it that can express it so eloquently

  • (4/4/2006 2:41:00 PM)

    im at a loss for words here.you are an accomplished writer, reading your poetry has humbled me so and has shown me that i have still got a lot of work to do if i ever want to live up to be something in the world of poetry.This poem tells this ancient story quite passionately and yet creates no biases, you wrote it from her viewpoint nad thus your opinions on the matter were over shadowed, instead what we read was mary`s story.You a truly blessed with words, you create rhyme naturally and the way this poem flowed with its rich imagery, its truly amazing.One gets the impression that you might have alluded to another mary, with the way the poem proceeds...the character stood for woman abused and looked down upon by men, tagged as whores and not only to the biblical mary....am i right on this

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