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Victoria Martinez phoenix, Az / United States, Female, 26
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  • (12/22/2007 10:31:00 AM)

    i like the repition, with the slight changes in pronouns and nouns, its effective, but i would leave out the last 'where' or bring it back up the the line before that, it doesnt deserve to be its own stanza, also i suggest a more clever title, being that the word where is repeated a lot throughout the poem. but i liked it all in all =) good job.

  • POEM: On the Lane by Victor Ekpo (8/16/2006 3:45:00 AM)

    it was absolutly lovely.. i really enjoyed it. =)

  • POEM: On the Lane by Victor Ekpo (7/15/2006 9:41:00 PM)

    hmm, its pretty awesome =D. i like your last line very much.

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