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Anoop Lokkur Melbourne / Australia, Male, 29
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  • POEM: Forbidden Fruit by Amera Andersen (5/30/2008 10:17:00 PM)

    very good nice poem! ! ! like this line
    He armed himself with palette, brush in hand

  • POEM: A Candle for Us by Jade Leven (1/10/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    we sleep in the same city every night
    but somehow you seem so far from me


    Under tthe same moon we lay asleep
    yet it feels worlds apart

    i like the poem but i think it wuld be much better if u edit it i jus gavae u an example above but thats wat poetry is about u express ur feelings and then once u have everything out u edit it...
    but still well written...

  • POEM: Insight by Ima Ryma (11/17/2007 3:23:00 AM)

    nice poem i like it esp the ending..although i think u could have been more detailed in the poem anyways a job welll done..check out my new poem called a poets love if u get time
    cheers

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  • Anoop Lokkur (10/11/2006 12:00:00 PM) Post reply

    hey
    plzzz go thro my poems and comment on them or vote so i can improve my poetry...
    thank you..

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