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  • POEM: A Comedy of Error by nimal dunuhinga (11/4/2007 1:35:00 AM)

    that didn't sound like a poem to me... I liked it.... but it didn't sound like a poem

  • POEM: The memory of you has made me ill by Annamaria Jara (11/4/2007 1:29:00 AM)

    I like the poem, it's pretty good. The format is kinda annoying though. A poem shouldn't be written the same way as a research or essay paper. With poems that rhyme, a line should end with one of the rhyming words and then begin the next line with a capital letter. The lines don't need to match up perfectly. Aside from format, I loved the poem. :) good job!

  • POEM: suicide by Carissa McBride (11/2/2007 4:37:00 PM)

    WTF! ? ! Don't do it! You seriously better not. You are an amazing poet and while that probably doesn't matter much, I'm sure you can find happiness eventually. Life sucks, I feel the same. Don't do it! I'm here for you. I don't know you at all... but I'll listen any time you need somebody to talk to. *hug*

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