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Hakeem Rahim Bronx / United States, Male, 33
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  • POEM: Bed Of Roses by Ivan Donn Carswell (5/6/2011 5:47:00 PM)

    Long time scribe in arms. Beautiful dedication written tenderly and in reflection. Thank you for this.

  • POEM: She's Married by Vikram G. Aarella (8/4/2009 9:06:00 AM)

    As others have said, well done with the poem. The playful longing is brought out by the rhyme scheme. It is at one lighthearted, and tragic. Thanks for sharing

  • POEM: She's Married by Vikram G. Aarella (4/9/2008 2:34:00 PM)

    The longing in this piece cuts deeply. There are may powerful lines. One that I liked was 'I would probably have hyperventilated/ To memorize your scent.' In the piece, I was not a reader, but a partcipant; I too faced the resignation. Your lost love will surely miss a person who feels deeply. Thank you for sharing

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