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  • Nia Riz (12/26/2008 3:48:00 AM) Post reply

    TODAY MY MOTHER DIED


    Today my mother died
    Silently without a sign
    Never inkling about her sadness
    Even though we filled her with madness
    Never being a burden for us
    Instead giving us all a bless

    Today my mother died
    The one to whom I always lied
    Screaming at her for her calmness
    Creating all kind of fuss
    Not thinking about her loneliness
    Putting her in deep distress

    Today my mother died
    Thinking about her past, I sighed
    The times I went away
    The times I never looked back
    The pains she felt astray
    The pains she felt setback

    Today my mother died
    I recalled her past and cried

    sania harris

  • Nia Riz (12/26/2008 2:39:00 AM) Post reply

    From my experience....writing comes as a talant from birth....but as nothing is impossible...everyone can write...

    to easy writing...follow these steps:

    1. take a topic (ex: mother)
    2. think about whether you want the poem to be sad or happy. (ex: sad)
    3. think about something that will make you very sad. (ex: death)
    4. think about a rhyming scheme. (ex: ababab)
    5. take a catchy line. (ex: today my mother died)
    6. take your pen and start playing with your words!

    here is a poem i have written like this:

    TODAY MY MOTHER DIED
    ---

    Today my mother died
    Silently without a sign
    Never inkling about her sadness
    Even though we filled her with madness
    Never being a burden for us
    Instead giving us all a bless

    Today my mother died
    The one to whom I always lied
    Screaming at her for her calmness
    Creating all kind of fuss
    Not thinking about her loneliness
    Putting her in deep distress

    Today my mother died
    Thinking about her past, I sighed
    The times I went away
    The times I never looked back
    The pains she felt astray
    The pains she felt setback

    Today my mother died
    I recalled her past and cried

    sania harris

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