you've got a ton of talent...i could tell right away from reading your poem that you've got 'it' haha whatever it is im not sure, but i really like your writing style, it's unique.
(2/24/2009 8:15:00 AM)
hahah...mine is more a 24 pack kind of evening ;)
(2/24/2009 8:13:00 AM)
I came back to this one for a re-read.
Very cool imagery here. I often contemplate love and it's up and downs in metaphor as well. I especially like the shuffling of the deck idea, and the constant change/ unchange. Allthough at the heart of this I sense you are tired of the change. Hopefully stability will come soon.