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Margaret Alice Second Pretoria / South Africa, Female, 53
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  • (11/25/2014 12:09:00 AM)

    Your are NOT crazy for believing in true love because the strength of your belief will create and empower the true love in your heart and evoke it from others. And life is the fairytale WE make of it - we can choose to make it a sad tale in which a witch is thrown into an oven or our own fairytale where a prince comes and fights a dragon to win his love's hand. And we can live the fairytale even when we grumble and stumble - and your love poetry is an inspiration for others who work on their own fairytales - my own tale is full of humour and happiness - so go on, the fairytale you are creating here is the story you will live! Kindest regards, Margaret Alice.

  • POEM: To My Sister by Mr. Spock (11/20/2014 11:54:00 PM)

    Your sister is right, rhyming can be so military and confining, there is much beauty in alliteration and assonance which can enrich any parlance, why stick to end rhyme when rhyme can hide anywhere in a line? And this is a beautiful tribute to your sister.

  • POEM: Big Bang Creation by Mr. Spock (11/20/2014 11:38:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this and looking at your other poems. Without a biography it is difficult to know what kind of training you had, but merging Big Bang theory and poetry makes for lovely reading and if I were a teacher, I would present this to the class to spark discussion about science and poetry. Kind regards, MA.

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