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  • POEM: What If The World Was Just A Book? by Emma Kessler (1/11/2010 4:05:00 PM)

    I love it. A short and sweet poem that tells the entire messege. I've actually wondered about that myself. Nice job.

  • POEM: When Did That Change? by Emma Kessler (1/11/2010 4:02:00 PM)

    Great poem, but you need an editor.

    Ex.
    'But then, it seems, to have come upon my all at once'

    'upon my all at once' should be 'upon me all at once'

    Ex.2
    'Nothing, but a few bitterly sweet memories'

    'few fitterly sweet memories' should be 'few bitter-sweet memories'

    Just little things that would get marks in english class but well thought out messege and nice choise of words. Excluding the grammer typos, I love it.

  • POEM: The Sea, That is, Your Eyes by Emma Kessler (1/11/2010 3:58:00 PM)

    Seem's a bit short and not the words I'd use but everyone has their own style and if this is the style that makes you happy, then it's a good poem. Flow is important and you can only have flow if you are happy with the style. It's a great messege and overall a good poem. I like it.

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