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  • POEM: Beautiful Butterfly by Dr. Antony Theodore (7/26/2010 11:16:00 AM)

    Your poem is really very very beautiful in content and in feel. It comes alive in your expression of your wishes, desires and hopes and conveys lovely serene memories for all those who live and love. Thanks for sharing. And best of all are the lovely comments at the end of the poem that is set in gold for all to behold. arya

  • POEM: Heart by Kesav Venkat Easwaran (7/24/2010 12:03:00 PM)

    A poisoned disciple fares better than an unpoisoned one in that the venom travels well under the skin for keeps. arya

  • POEM: Tea Plucking Girl by Abhinav Baruah (4/3/2010 8:44:00 PM)

    When the shine kills the dark of the romantic night, the despondency and hopelessness find shades of green in romantisising with the feathery touch of brilliance in the form of the sunburnt female of your desire. This poem begins well though Abhinav, I personally feel that you have to keep to one tense throughout your poem in order to sustain smooth delivery of the same. The central theme shines well and the scene is created for the normal desire of a man who is on a vacation especially in the vicinity of large areas of greenery. The poem ends on a painful note, expressing the wishful thinking of humanity. Very fine words. Please get back to me on this - arya

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