The Wife part is a little strong. It however was very good
I LOVE IT! Right what you want and dont ever let some one tell you how or wat to right, you know how to right and the reason you right is in your heart so dont ever let someone change your work or it would no linger be so uniquely yours.
Very nice I like how you let your 'TRUE' emotions show and tha you are not afraid to express the way you feel.