A great write, filled with descriptive language that manages to capture its essence and all the emotions expressed. However, I have to agree with Robert Melliard's comment (via Facebook) , as well as those of Lama Mandow and Romeo Della Valle - the English version is rather difficult to understand at times, and I imagine that the original in German is probably the better one. In any case it's a lovely piece, thanks for sharing it.
A powerful and provocative write that forces one to face the many flaws in our modern world and summon the will to change for the better...such is the example you set in this poem, and I am sure that you will continue to motivate others in your cause and help pave the path for a brighter future. Wonderful piece, keep on writing :)
An honest, inspirational piece that encourages readers to take advantage of the moment and join forces while we still can, before it's too late...sadly, selfishness, greed, prejudice and misunderstanding are all factors that have led to the gradual deterioration of almost all moral foundations of society. Indeed, united we stand, but divided we fall...great poem, I enjoyed reading it.