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Alex Gomez Chicago / United States, Male, 22
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  • POEM: Forgotten by Jennifer Ottinger (12/20/2010 3:36:00 PM)

    Admittedly depressing, but you show that you know a bit about poetic structure and some higher level wording. I'd recommend watching out for the syllable count of each line you put down. Syllables hold the flow of a rhyme scheme together. Otherwise, bravo.

  • POEM: Why are you so far away? by Jennifer Ottinger (12/20/2010 3:33:00 PM)

    I'll be blunt, it was written in quite a minimalist style, and indeed it is a little juvenile. I do see the potential here, though. What you need to work on is expanding your vocabulary and possibly enhancing the structure of your poems.

  • POEM: Why are you so far away? by Jennifer Ottinger (7/25/2010 9:44:00 AM)

    I will admit, this was quite an awesome poem. Please continue to defend your right to use the pencil against any adversary. You have a great talent.

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