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  • POEM: The Pair of Boots by Marwa Rakha (11/12/2010 6:36:00 AM)

    Silver ashes of resentment I swallowed
    In pain and agony I sat and wallowed

    Out of my eyes tears like silver bullets race
    Like lead balls they rolled down my face


    sweet stanzes..i really enjoyed this poem very much.. well wriiten..impressive..hmmm sweet 10/10+++++++

  • POEM: The Magic Mirror by Marwa Rakha (11/12/2010 6:34:00 AM)

    Oh mirror... Why can’t you lie?
    Why don’t you tell me that I am the fairest fair of all?
    Why don’t you tell me that I am the smartest head of all?
    Why don’t you let me stand proud and tall?
    Will you at least be there when I fall?
    Oh … Mirror … mirror on the wall …
    Why are you not answering my call?

    very touchy and sweet poem with meaningful idea.. lovelly one..10/10++++++

  • POEM: Maternal Holly Eyes by Sylva Portoian (11/11/2010 5:38:00 AM)

    lovely write and meaningful plus reality based.. liked it

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