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Crisa Earley Cambridge / United States, Female, 21
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  • POEM: Broken Pieces of a Smile by DeAire Taylor (4/12/2012 10:28:00 PM)

    Its good, It has a depth to it. If you were going for feeling you have acheived your goal; however, your rhythm is off. Try fixing your gramatical structure, add commas, semicolons, ect. Without it it reads almost as if its a list opposed to a poem. Adding commas, ect. will creat pauses giving the reader a chance to absorb what you, the poet, is trying to say.

  • POEM: / Lost In Words / by ahmed khaled (2/2/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good!

  • POEM: Displacement by subodh pandey (2/1/2012 2:37:00 PM)

    Your poetry has a lot of imagery, I love it. Again well done!

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