Again, i like it. I can realy see myself in this poem. I get a sense of mental health problems in this one, my mental health problems. I dont know if you've sufferd the same as me but i can realy see the past few years of my life in this peom. I realy enjoy reading your work.
Oooooo i like this one, excellent. Very well writen n a very nice ryme to it,2 out of 2 Ive read so far and both are awsome. I love all the key points, the way you've created a subtle picture in the back of my mind of todays life and the way we live. I can relate to it aswel. Your a very talented writer.