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Jeline Loh Jen-Li Selangor / Malaysia, Female, 28
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  • POEM: A Fairy Song by William Shakespeare (2/9/2012 12:15:00 AM)

    Fated @ Jeline Loh

    It’s been a long time
    Ages since I knew you
    Somehow a stranger to me
    It felt like I have known you


    Although I really don’t
    Ardent am I to find out more
    Time will tell yet it won’t
    Curiosity is still a core


    Yet now we spoke again
    Someday our path will cross
    With a crystal glass of champagne
    Somehow we can have a toss


    If fate is something we hold
    We shouldn’t let it go
    That is what we were told
    It wouldn’t be long ago

  • POEM: Choosing A Wife by Godfrey Rust (2/2/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    As I walked through the valley
    The valley of life or the other
    Dark and winded is the other alley
    I couldn’t foretell if I even bother

    The journey is such a pang
    I doubt there is enjoyment
    The process is far too long
    If it will only bring torment

    For some it is to endure
    For others it is to fulfill
    For me I am rather aware
    That I would rather enthrall

    In either alley let us will
    In either valley let us triumph

  • POEM: Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night by Dylan Thomas (2/2/2012 4:17:00 AM)

    Checked out my poem! Your comments are much appreciated!
    The Valley or The Alley?

    As I walked through the valley
    The valley of life or the other
    Dark and winded is the other alley
    I couldn’t foretell if I even bother

    The journey is such a pang
    I doubt there is enjoyment
    The process is far too long
    If it will only bring torment

    For some it is to endure
    For others it is to fulfill
    For me I am rather aware
    That I would rather enthrall

    In either alley let us will
    In either valley let us triumph

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  • Jeline Loh Jen-Li (6/14/2012 12:45:00 PM) Post reply

    You were all sweet and persistence to me
    You gave me the world to have me
    You pursued me relentlessly
    Well I said yes finally

    I trusted you for your commitment
    I thought I owned you completely
    You know me as a perfectionist
    I gave you my heart willingly

    Everything else seems to be your priority
    Now, I am never the first in your mind
    Everyone tells me I am just a minority
    Now, I realized I am silly to be kind

    Where were you when I needed you
    Where were you when I am alone
    Where were you when I call you
    Why were you my first and we are done!

  • Jeline Loh Jen-Li (6/14/2012 12:26:00 PM) Post reply

    I should be sleeping by now
    As I had a very long day
    Went to work and a musical show
    I am exhausted in every way

    Can you feel the love tonight
    Do you feel you burning with love
    But there is not any at sight
    Only a touch of a gentle dove

    I cry out to you my lover
    I am really very empty on the inside
    I don't want to be a giver
    I don't want to wear a mask outside

    Won't just someone care to love me
    Won't just anybody pray to love me

  • Jeline Loh Jen-Li (4/17/2012 1:58:00 AM) Post reply

    Hope you guys enjoy this. :)

    I Miss You

    Every little thing reminds me of you
    Even when I am asleep, I dream of you
    Every songs played resembles our story
    Every moment we had brings us glory

    Every step I take, brings us closer
    Every hour I try, to be a composer
    Even when I am awake, I think of you
    Everywhere I go, I feel you

    Your loving kindness
    Your tenderness
    Your grace
    Your love

    I miss walking to bible school every morning
    With your presence wrapped around me
    Never a day of my life with you was boring
    With your whispers of joy uplifting me

    I miss those times with you
    I miss it so dearly
    I miss feeling like no one else but you
    I miss you sincerely!

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