- Profession :
- retired usps clerk
- Education :
- quit college
About Me : I think one of my high school English teachers gave me the only D I ever got on a postcard [gee, over a year after writing this bio i i have gone to edit it and find ... more »
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(9/20/2013 6:47:00 PM)
can anyone tell me (please) how to find a poem (i know its name and author's name) which has been submitted to the contest now in progress
on poemhunter, WITHOUT having to click through scores (hundreds?) of poem titles looking for it? i do not plan to enter a poem myself, but i've
been asked to look at and vote on a friend's poem. THANKS. bri :)
p.s. i found the poem once after minutes of clicking, but i accidentally clicked it away and could not figure out a way to go back to it.
(5/20/2012 11:52:00 PM)
Aditya, i really enjoyed the story and how you described the woman/girl. and suddenly she was gone! that is too bad if it really happened to you, but i liked the way you quickly changed the story from " glad" to " sad" . i do have some suggestions concerning your English, which overall i found to be excellent.
line 2: " clam" i'm sure is meant to be " calm"
line 7: dropp the word " the" . it's not needed.
line 10: change it to " Stilled the world for a while."
line 19: try " I now stand amid (or amidst) the crowded place."
from Bri Edwards .......nice job ......8 or 9 out of ten, if you make my suggested changes