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(7/31/2012 11:40:00 AM)
Evil Mary Alison always on my mind,
Another girl so special brings me to
a time back when.
Happiness was a promise, and true
darkness was not yet mine.
Before the broken heart, life torn apart,
as shattered pieces of yesterday were
lying every where.
And I sat so cold and alone as heartache
filled my soul.
Then I cried.
My mind played over the way things might
What could I do to make love new again?
Was there anything?
Did she feel the same?
Then all hope was blown away.
When I heard them say.
She was his.
Life grew so dark I lost my will to live.
And to this day, I find it hard to forgive.
This thing so cold.
She stole my heart and left me in darkness
with no love inside my soul.
(7/7/2012 1:54:00 AM)
I never learned to write poems in the way poetry is taught in school. I might pretend to understand all of the terms but no I don't. I just write the way it comes out. This is a very good poem with a very deep meaning. I find it hard to believe it is your first attempt or that you may have copied it. Just joking about the copy part. I think it is really good and worst case you may just clean up a few little things I can't even point out to keep the real poets from crying. I really don't know much about poetry I only write it though.