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  • Gjc Brisso (10/18/2012 5:02:00 AM) Post reply

    Line By Line

    Writing line by line
    Can i capture the truth in rhyme
    You tell me okay its fine
    Whats fine my writings or the rhymes
    Have you read enough this time
    Rhyme line rhyme
    Am i wasting my time
    Do i even comprehend
    The thoughts the static static
    Inside my head
    I send a piece to a friend
    Or are they scared to offend
    I need to know if its rubbish
    Putting it out there to be published
    Rhyme line verse
    Do you speak the truth or were you coerced
    So im taking you at your word
    You have listened you heard
    Line by line
    Rhyme by rhyme
    Can i be convicted of poetry crimes
    For writing dribble
    About nothing as long as it rhymes
    Well thank you my friend
    Here is another i am about to send
    Read it and read it again
    Maybe you can send on to a friend
    Okay time to go
    I have more pieces of dribble you know

  • Gjc Brisso (9/29/2012 10:24:00 AM) Post reply

    hi poets if anyone has the time to read some of my pieces that would be great thanking you Gjc Boyle

  • Gjc Brisso (9/19/2012 10:21:00 AM) Post reply

    can i please get my pieces read see if im wasting my time thanking you gavin boyle

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