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  • POEM: Hell on Earth by Zachary Hoyt (1/9/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    very deep i can closley relate..could you read mine and comment your opinion, it is also called hell on earth.thanks

  • POEM: My Best Friend by Mukesh Parmar (12/30/2012 12:27:00 PM)

    very moving poems i really enjoyed reading.feel free to read and comment on any of mine. god bless

  • POEM: Mother by Bailey Jackson (11/12/2012 9:36:00 PM)

    this poem is very good.i have a couple poems you mite like if u get a chance to look at my page..life of a £20 note, and beauty on a winters night..thankyou

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  • Nic Hillen (2/1/2014 4:16:00 AM) Post reply

    hi there would appreicate any opinions or feedback on some of my of my poems i have been away for a year and just returned and want to start writing more poems any advice would be gratful to help me improve on my writing...thank you

  • Nic Hillen (2/10/2013 8:01:00 AM) Post reply

    Spring Blooms

    The bitter fearless frost departs
    The snow has being dismissed
    A vibrant spring has given birth
    The harsh winter wont be missed

    A dormant land begins to stir
    The frost admits defeat
    Nature starts to come alive
    Submerge its winters sleep

    Vibrant colours start to scatter
    As spring is now in bloom
    Luscious flowers come to life
    A scent of sweet perfume

    Lambs leap around with joy
    Birds all sing together
    Buds flourish out in bloom
    I season all do treasure

    Golden rays of sunshine
    Rise in skies of blue
    Dry away the winters tears
    And clears the dancing dew

    Springs bought all back to life
    But the cycle passes through
    The sun beats down like thunder
    As summers now in view

  • Nic Hillen (1/23/2013 5:58:00 PM) Post reply

    i have got a few new poems on my page i would be grateful to hear some comments and feedback from them and maybe rate them as you feel it deserves....many thanks

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