nice one. i love the rhymes
u try. its wonderful.
Time has come and go. Time shall come
and go. this line is powerful and simple. infact, they can stand alone
hmmmm. when has poetry become this watery and structureless. it gat no theme and no soul. please one shouldnt dare call this a poem
Yes poetry is a very good scene for expurgating the rumblings and gladness of the heart.