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(10/21/2014 5:18:00 AM)
I love the concept of your poem, its witty and evocative, however, it lacks execution. I love the fact that you sought to condense it into short lines as oppose to dragging out the action. Give more meat to the poem in terms of imagery and you'll be well on your way to writing a short poem with enough punch to make Stevie Smith and Emily Dickinson sit up straight :)
(10/21/2014 5:15:00 AM)
The concept of the poem is without fault, the execution lacks creativity and does not show the creative zeal you would expect a post-modern poet to have. I'll say it is a work in progress, but you are headed towards the right direction!
(10/21/2014 5:10:00 AM)
Writing poetry is not just an expression you want to convey, it is a CREATIVE expression. If your poem is NOT creative its basically RUBBISH.