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Anand Brown Uitenhage / South Africa, Male, 20
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  • (10/9/2014 5:56:00 AM)

    Touching poem, not a political statement but rather a statement of the scale of human cruelty!

  • POEM: Her First Time. by Achill Ladd (10/9/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    I was fooled I have to admit! Very well written Achill.

  • POEM: A Lost Friend. by Achill Ladd (10/9/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    This is such a clever poem, amid its malancholy nature. Vivid, expressive and absorbing!

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  • Anand Brown (10/21/2014 5:18:00 AM) Post reply

    I love the concept of your poem, its witty and evocative, however, it lacks execution. I love the fact that you sought to condense it into short lines as oppose to dragging out the action. Give more meat to the poem in terms of imagery and you'll be well on your way to writing a short poem with enough punch to make Stevie Smith and Emily Dickinson sit up straight :)

  • Anand Brown (10/21/2014 5:15:00 AM) Post reply

    The concept of the poem is without fault, the execution lacks creativity and does not show the creative zeal you would expect a post-modern poet to have. I'll say it is a work in progress, but you are headed towards the right direction!

  • Anand Brown (10/21/2014 5:10:00 AM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    Writing poetry is not just an expression you want to convey, it is a CREATIVE expression. If your poem is NOT creative its basically RUBBISH.

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