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Calvin Curdle
Calvin Curdle Apam / Ghana, Male, 21
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  • (1/6/2015 6:08:00 AM)

    Thanks for the comment.

    What I am implying is love existing in another form. Existing as a force that hold things together.

    When u get this reply, Let me know.

  • POEM: I LOVE YOU.. by Mary Amrutha (4/16/2014 6:39:00 PM)

    Wonderful! I waiting for this to happen to me ; -)

  • POEM: hasta la vista by Mary Amrutha (4/16/2014 6:31:00 PM)

    Reminds me of when I completed high skul. Amrutha, u captured the mood!

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  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 11:29:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    When will there be another contest?September slipped through my fingers.

  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 11:10:00 AM) Post reply

    I am working on a verse story which is not complete yet. What I want is some comments or advice to make it more appealing. So I am posting it here in a form of series. Enjoy.

    VIEWS

    IN THE BAR

    (Woman)
    I knocked on the counter in threes
    Once, twice, thrice
    And turned
    Inward the bar was quiet
    Dark and lifeless.
    The benches were dead.
    I heard footsteps
    I turned.
    It was a boy about ten.
    Can I have a bottle please.

    (Boy)
    We have closed.

    (Woman)
    A friend is celebrating his birthday.
    I want to suprise him.

    (Boy)
    The time is ten. We have closed.

    (Woman)
    Pleeaasse.
    I am just one person.
    I am buying a bottle. It would not take long.

    (Boy)
    My mother would be back soon.
    I will sleep with marks if she meet me selling.

    (Woman)
    His expressions especially the face was begging
    But the bottle I also needed.

    (Boy)
    I can't help you.

    (Woman)
    He turned, living, but
    Grab! I had his arm in my hand.
    He looked. Suprise
    Spelt his eyes.
    I know what to do.
    Wait. What is your name?

    (Boy)
    Abeku

    (Woman)
    In hand bag,
    My hand ransacked
    And pulled
    A red note.
    Abeku
    I pressed the note into his hand
    I folded that hand.
    Please get me that bottle.
    Two forces battled in the boy
    I could feel it
    As his eyes stared.
    I kept looking into his eyes.

    (Abeku)
    Okay

    (Woman)
    Thank you.

    (Abeku)
    What do you want?

    (Woman)
    One of the strongest you have got.

    (Abeku)
    Which one. They are many strongs.

    (Woman)
    You choose for me.
    I saw him dissappear
    In the dark ahead.
    And as I stared I was lost to the present and found in the
    past.

    THE PAST

    (Lucy)
    I was resting my body since lectures wrere over.
    The time struck 8: 30 pm. Feeling quite bored,
    I decided to see Frank. He stayed not on campus.
    It was a matter of foot works and not vehicle wheels.
    So I sneaked like a snake from my room and into
    The lighted town.
    By 30 min time I was on Frank's compound.
    Good evening.

    (Tenant {Woman})
    Evening

    (Lucy)
    Please is Frank in?

    (Tenant{Woman})
    Yes

    (Lucy)
    Thank you.
    The house I invaded and climbed upstairs.
    I knocked the door in quick threes.
    Once, I waited, waited, waited
    Twice, waited and waited
    Thrice I waited.
    If Frank must be asleep these should wake him up!
    Or, What is happening?
    Click, click, click
    How can I help you?

  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 10:52:00 AM) Post reply

    You can try writing a verse novel (Poetry+Novel) .

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