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Calvin Curdle
Calvin Curdle Apam / Ghana, Male, 21
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  • (1/6/2015 6:08:00 AM)

    Thanks for the comment.

    What I am implying is love existing in another form. Existing as a force that hold things together.

    When u get this reply, Let me know.

  • POEM: I LOVE YOU.. by Mary Amrutha (4/16/2014 6:39:00 PM)

    Wonderful! I waiting for this to happen to me ; -)

  • POEM: hasta la vista by Mary Amrutha (4/16/2014 6:31:00 PM)

    Reminds me of when I completed high skul. Amrutha, u captured the mood!

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  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 11:29:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    When will there be another contest?September slipped through my fingers.

  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 11:10:00 AM) Post reply

    I am working on a verse story which is not complete yet. What I want is some comments or advice to make it more appealing. So I am posting it here in a form of series. Enjoy.



    I knocked on the counter in threes
    Once, twice, thrice
    And turned
    Inward the bar was quiet
    Dark and lifeless.
    The benches were dead.
    I heard footsteps
    I turned.
    It was a boy about ten.
    Can I have a bottle please.

    We have closed.

    A friend is celebrating his birthday.
    I want to suprise him.

    The time is ten. We have closed.

    I am just one person.
    I am buying a bottle. It would not take long.

    My mother would be back soon.
    I will sleep with marks if she meet me selling.

    His expressions especially the face was begging
    But the bottle I also needed.

    I can't help you.

    He turned, living, but
    Grab! I had his arm in my hand.
    He looked. Suprise
    Spelt his eyes.
    I know what to do.
    Wait. What is your name?


    In hand bag,
    My hand ransacked
    And pulled
    A red note.
    I pressed the note into his hand
    I folded that hand.
    Please get me that bottle.
    Two forces battled in the boy
    I could feel it
    As his eyes stared.
    I kept looking into his eyes.


    Thank you.

    What do you want?

    One of the strongest you have got.

    Which one. They are many strongs.

    You choose for me.
    I saw him dissappear
    In the dark ahead.
    And as I stared I was lost to the present and found in the


    I was resting my body since lectures wrere over.
    The time struck 8: 30 pm. Feeling quite bored,
    I decided to see Frank. He stayed not on campus.
    It was a matter of foot works and not vehicle wheels.
    So I sneaked like a snake from my room and into
    The lighted town.
    By 30 min time I was on Frank's compound.
    Good evening.

    (Tenant {Woman})

    Please is Frank in?


    Thank you.
    The house I invaded and climbed upstairs.
    I knocked the door in quick threes.
    Once, I waited, waited, waited
    Twice, waited and waited
    Thrice I waited.
    If Frank must be asleep these should wake him up!
    Or, What is happening?
    Click, click, click
    How can I help you?

  • Calvin Curdle (11/2/2013 10:52:00 AM) Post reply

    You can try writing a verse novel (Poetry+Novel) .

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