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Akhtar Jawad
Akhtar Jawad Karachi / Pakistan, Male, 69
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Akhtar Jawad's last comments on poems and poets

  • POEM: Limerick 13 (Knowledge) by Paul Sebastian (10/30/2014 5:18:00 AM)

    Valsa is right, empty vessels make too much sound.

  • POEM: Hope by Amir Foroughi (10/30/2014 2:42:00 AM)

    Are you still there?
    I see you the last dream
    Fog of black arcane sages
    One last kiss
    Are you still there?
    Are you still there?
    A beautiful poem on hope, hope that exists till the last beath!

  • POEM: Swings Of Life by Valsa George (10/30/2014 2:36:00 AM)

    It's always wonderful to write a poem on kids, and if a poetess like Valsa writes it, not only Valsa all the readers go back in their care free childhood............10

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/18/2014 9:42:00 PM) Post reply

    The Laughing Mirror

    I have a laughing mirror,
    When a wave of proud,
    Far from the humble banks,
    Attacks my body,
    Attacks my soul,
    Disturbs my balance,
    I see my face,
    In the laughing mirror.

    I have a laughing mirror,
    When ugliness of someone,
    Shuts down my eyelids,
    My soul is angry,
    Warns and instructs,
    Open your eyes,
    And see your face,
    In the laughing mirror.

    Tears come out,
    I am frustrated,
    How I ugly I am!
    How selfish I am!
    And I am proud of myself!
    Shame on me!
    Someone whispers in ears,
    You have a plane mirror too,

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/16/2014 10:19:00 PM) Post reply

    My poem A Broken Doll is a picture of my sentiments on a misbehave of my dearest child and my most loving daughter. But it's not the closeup just a tangent snap.

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/16/2014 4:01:00 PM) Post reply

    A broken Doll

    When someone broke my heart,
    One never knew one was sitting in my heart,
    I am not picking broken pieces of my heart,
    I am picking pieces of someone,
    Shall I succeed in joining the pieces,
    I think I shall,
    But the spots of the joints,
    Will make the doll ugly,
    And the doll would not like to see herself,
    In a mirror any more.

    Akhtar Jawad
    October 17,2014 at 0200 hours

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