(2nd July / 1981 nairobi)

What do you think this poem is about?

A meaningful life

A meaningful life,
You cherished all the life that I had,
Sincerely this is my definition,
When you come on my way,
Tell me that my dreams make me increase,
There is no moment for hesitation,
I can fully understand,
That I believe,
In the higher dwelling,
Come and teach me your word,
Come here to end all my grievance,
I can never sleep,
Since it is all by your word that I increase,
I will never fail but prevail,
Let every word that you speak,
Come and heal my broken whims.

Submitted: Saturday, June 09, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, March 09, 2011


Comments about this poem (A meaningful life by Maxim Muyu )

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (6/7/2008 12:39:00 PM)

    The strength of this writing is the economy of words and the strength of the body
    of content. The ending was good but the beginning, which is most important in
    any writing, gave no direction to the reader. This makes the message transmission more difficult than necessary. This is not a large flaw with the
    good ending but blessed is the ending. I gave it my normal good poem score
    of 8.

    GW62

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