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Ebi Robert

(6 feb 1990 / Yenagoa(Niger Delta))

A MOIST EYE BEMOANS.


I never knew how the communication works
It's just like several waves works together.
And make me suffer
But am sustained in a way.
And where the boldness comes, I do not know.
However I am bold.
I do not know the parents voice anymore
But I know thy work.
What is this communication I could not communicate?
Was it a coincidence?
What is this communication?
A communication of death?
Or do I have an eye that sees nothing?
I do not know.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 27, 2013

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  • Alkesh Pandey (11/15/2013 1:28:00 PM)

    Yup... The moaning eye is moist...
    Bt it communicates all emotions.

    A good work.... Compells to think (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/14/2013 9:18:00 AM)

    Very deep, as you look for an answer to life's puzzle of communicating the truth or just playing the game of life! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (11/14/2013 7:40:00 AM)

    The moist in the communication is superb. But what is it communicating with you often? Death? Leave that thought for now. Be optimistic and happy...
    By the by, reading my poem/poems is left to your choice and you may do in a random manner. I shall read your poems as well in a random manner. All the best Mr Ebi... (Report) Reply

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